> > 自分自身よってまだ改訂できていなかった(´ωﾟ)一節なんだけど
> > これ中学の頃に(´ωﾟ)よく間違えていた記憶が戻ったよ
> > ×your face will see the good face and figure
> > ○your face will seem the good face and figure
> > ○your face will show the good face and figure
>   ○your face will become the good face and figure
> > 英会話ってさ(´ωﾟ)意外と中学レベルのものが要求されるよね
> > I finished the class of today at university, after it I have been drinking a beer, and (then) my face already seem the just a red.
>                                                                                                                 ^^^^become

ここをもうちょっと攻めると(´ωﾟ)becameが妥当だけどさ(´ωﾟ)さらにhave+過去分詞にして過去完了にするとかっこいいかもしれないね
I finished the class of today at university, after it I have been drinking a beer, and (then) my face had already became the just a red.

> becomeでも(´ωﾟ)いいね

参考：2009/11/18(水)17時51分43秒